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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:28, 24 April 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Municipalities of Jalisco

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Nominator(s): Mattximus (talk) and Coyatoc (talk) 16:00, 21 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

We are continuing our goal of bringing all lists of municipalities in Mexico up to a consistent, high standard (9 states already have their municipality lists featured using this standardized format, along with dozens of other list of municipalities in North America). We have updated the information to reflect the most recent census and tried to incorporate changes from previous nominations. The page should be pretty standardized but there can always be improvements. Thanks to everyone who regularly reviews these lists! Mattximus (talk) 16:00, 21 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:25, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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  • The article seems to be written in American English based on the format of the dates, so shouldn't the second sentence refer to "kilometers"?
  • There's two identical entries for Ameca  Done
  • Arandas is listed as the municipal seat of two different municipalities - is that correct?  Done
  • There's two identical entries for Hostotipaquillo  Done
  • That's all I've got - great work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:42, 21 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Looks like User:Cobblet got to most of these before I did. Thanks for the review! The dates could be changed to the more international English, are you referring to the format in the references? Mattximus (talk) 03:24, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Mattximus: - no, I meant the dates of incorporation. These are written in the format "August 15, 1823", which is the US date format. That's fine, but in that case the rest of the article should be in US English. I'm pretty sure the only word that impacts is "kilometers" (that is how it's spelt in the States, isn't it? Correct me if I am wrong......) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:25, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm the conversion template used is hardcoded to spell it kilometres, and that is closest to the Spanish spelling. I see dates written like the incorporation date format in Canada which also uses the kilometres spelling, can we say it's consistent that way? Mattximus (talk) 14:17, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks again for your review! Mattximus (talk) 18:40, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Is note i written correctly? Same goes with note o and v - not sure the second "and" is needed.  Done
  • I would rewrite note j San Gabriel was renamed Venustiano Carranza between 1934 and 1993. The "between sounds like the date of renaming is sometime within a date range.  Done

That's all. Solid work. I'll go ahead and support given the above is addressed. ~ HAL333

CommentsSupport from Aza24

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  • I'll be back to do a source review, but some non-source comments first:
  • An RFC recently passed a few months ago asking for captions on all tables (MOS:DTAB)  Done
  • The pictures look rather odd on my screen, on my smaller screen they're stacked 2 on top of 3 on top of 1; on my bigger screen they're stacked 4 on top of 2–both leave huge white space, and looking very awkward. I don't really know what a solution for this would look like, but the current formatting is less than ideal
    • Part of the issue here is this is all happening before the table—a.k.a the main part of the article—creating a weird buffer in between
  • It's better but still a little awkward—I think the root of the problem is the second, Municipalities of Jalisco image. I see some of your other FLs (though I haven't checked the all) don't have such a map, perhaps remove? Though it is a cool map, the fact that its without labels for the various municipalities makes its actual helpfulness negligible imo. Aza24 (talk) 22:27, 24 March 2021 (UTC)  Done[reply]
  • I believe articles with 3 or less sections makes the TOC not show up, in that sense I would suppose it's alright to not have one. However, if you're so inclined, you could add __FORCETOC__ or for a horizontal one, simply, add {{horizontal TOC}} anywhere. Aza24 (talk) 22:27, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for the info. I tried adding the FORCETOC and I see now why the default is no TOC with 3 sections, it looks kinda funny. But I don't hold a strong opinion. I'm inclined to just leave it off as the default recommends. Mattximus (talk) 19:38, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review! I have two questions for you above. Mattximus (talk) 20:37, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Just a friendly ping for User:Aza24, wondering if you had a chance to see my two questions above? Mattximus (talk) 22:17, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the ping! I forgot to add this one to my list to check back on Aza24 (talk) 22:27, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks again Aza24 for your great suggestions! I believe all your concerns are now addressed. Mattximus (talk) 19:38, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Happy to support Aza24 (talk) 05:03, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoted. --PresN 22:41, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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