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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Scorpion0422 18:04, 22 October 2008 (UTC).[reply]

List of universities in Nova Scotia

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I am submitting my first list for the FLC Contest. Please participate if you've got something to comment on! The map was created by Matthewedwards, by the way :) Gary King (talk) 20:12, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done Gary King (talk) 03:37, 11 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments
    • "Dalhousie University is the only university in Nova Scotia that is a member of the Group of Thirteen, a group of leading research-intensive universities in Canada, when it was added to the group (previously named the Group of 10) in April 2006 along with the University of Calgary and University of Ottawa" – feels like two sentences unsuccessfully spliced together. How about "... research-intensive universities in Canada. It was added to the Group [capital letter?] in April 2006..."?
    • Is there any way of getting the map so that the names don't overwrite each other? Perhaps use "1", "2", "3" and a key underneath?
  • Otherwise, looks good. BencherliteTalk 22:30, 14 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
All done. I've notified Matthewedwards about the map, as he made it and I'm no expert with it. Gary King (talk) 02:59, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Overwrite each other? As in on top of each other? I don't see it. Can you make a screenshot or describe exactly what's happening? Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 03:03, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Image:NSmap problem.jpg shows what I see. Same problem (but worse, as more overlapping labels) at Image:Universities in Québec.svg. BencherliteTalk 21:58, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Are you using a different skin from the default Wikipedia skin? Because the text is not nearly as big for me as it is for you; the text is small enough that they don't overlap for me. Gary King (talk) 02:31, 16 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
That certainly is strange. Here's what I see: Image:Nova scotia FLC prob.jpg, on a 26" widescreen at 1360px x 768px. As you can see from the original picture, Image:Universities in Nova Scotia.svg, the text is not on the image, it's done through Template:Nova Scotia universities map, which utilises Template:Image label begin and Template:Image label small for the text. Do Template:NFL Labelled Map and Template:Lanarkshire and Ayrshire Railway Map do the same thing? They use the same two templates Image label templates. Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 03:13, 16 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm, those others are OK. I'm using Firefox and the default skin, btw. So it seems to be just me, then? (Mind you, my large-screen laptop required a tweak to be made to AWB at one stage so that the scroll-bars worked...). So, with that sorted, it's a support. BencherliteTalk 16:20, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support but for...

  • "Two universities, the Atlantic School of Theology and the University of King's College, do not have graduate level programs. " seems oddly placed in that paragraph.
  • Location(s) doesn't need the (s).

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:02, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I shuffled the lead around a bit. Gary King (talk) 18:22, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from SatyrTN
  • The lede is longer than the list. Heck, the References are longer than the list. Can the lede be trimmed?
  • Update the key to read "U – Undergraduate enrollment; P – Postgraduate enrollment; T – Total enrollment"?
  • Otherwise, things look good. From a "Contest" perspective, using the shortest list of Universities of any province (unless List of universities in Nunavit is shorter?) is tricky :)
  • Conditional Support -- SatyrTN (talk / contribs) 19:48, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done. I don't see a problem with a longer lead. It gives some useful background information on the universities in the province, why they are founded in that order, etc. Gary King (talk) 19:52, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Um - but it is longer than the list. It's not a show stopper, but would you revisit to see if it can be trimmed at all? -- SatyrTN (talk / contribs) 20:15, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I removed a paragraph's worth of text. Gary King (talk) 20:24, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • The images in the Universities section should have periods at the end of their captions.
  • "The oldest university in the province is the University of King's College, established in 1789, while the newest university is Cape Breton University, established in 1974." "while"-->and.
  • "University student enrollment in Nova Scotia ranges from the smallest university, the Atlantic School of Theology, with 140 students, and the largest university, Dalhousie University, with 15,140 students."-->University student enrollment in Nova Scotia ranges from the Atlantic School of Theology with 140 students to Dalhousie University with 15,140 students.
  • "Dalhousie University, first known as Dalhousie College, was established in Halifax in 1820 with the help of the Presbyterian Church, while Acadia University was founded by Baptists." "while"-->and. Dabomb87 (talk) 21:52, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
All done Gary King (talk) 22:04, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment' : picture captions: "Dalhouse University has the largest student enrollment.", "The University of King's College is the oldest university." I supppose that it's all relative inside the province, but it's not clear from the text. --Qyd (talk) 02:05, 21 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done Gary King (talk) 02:11, 21 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment I think you need to use a single source that establishes the set of universities. Although this lists only 10 (not AST), this, this and this all list 11 and seem to use "degree-granting institution" as their definition. Can you pick one as the source for your first sentence in the lead. You might also want to edit the template at the bottom to list University of King's College and leave a note on the talk page as to what definitive source should be considered (looking at the history of that template, there's a lot of original research going on). I'm assuming all of the second lead paragraph is sourced to the eBook rather than your own personal observation. Since the book doesn't appear to have pages in the online edition, can you at least indicate the chapter where you got this info. Colin°Talk 19:04, 21 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
All done Gary King (talk) 02:56, 22 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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