Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of members of the 14th Parliament of Pakistan/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:33, 22 September 2016 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of members of the 14th Parliament of Pakistan (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Saqib (talk) 17:23, 3 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I think it meets all of the FL criteria and so has great potential to become a Featured List. it is one of the most important lists in the scope of WikiProject Pakistan. It has good lead and prose and is referenced as per the referencing guidelines. Saqib (talk) 17:23, 3 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments by Dharmadhyaksha
Good to see a different type of list being nominated here. But this needs a lot of work and raises many a basic doubts.
- So this is a list of MNAs as on 1 June 2013, the oath-taking day or has it been updated for current statues also. Means have some people vacated their seats for any reason; maybe removed/resigned from party, or death, or anything such?
- Not understanding how the sections are arranged? Why aren;t they alphabetic? Use full form of FATA in section names.
- If notes column of most entries is empty then get rid of it.
- Some guys have Dr. behind their name which could be skipped.
- One woman has Mrs. behind here name which can be dropped.
- If you are using only one ref for whole table then it need not be in each row.
- Lead is quite week and needs more info.
- What do you mean by "70 reserved seats for women and religious minorities". Are they not elected? If not then how are they selected?
- "..marked the historic constitutional transition of power from one democratically-elected government to next for the first time in the history of Pakistan". So what was happening before that should be mentioned.
More comments might come... §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 05:26, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- User:Dharmadhyaksha: Thank you for reviewing the list. Please find answers to your question below,
- This is a list of MNAs as on 3 August, 2016. MNA's who were elected during 2013 general elections and have left their seats are not mentioned in the list. I just replaced them with new ones. I don't know where to mention those MNA's, maybe in the notes?
- Sections are now arranged in alphabetical order.
- Notes column could be removed but if we can use them for mentioning MNA's who left since.
- Titles Dr. and Mrs. have been removed.
- References removed from each row.
- I will work on lead section.
- The 70 seats reserved for women and religious minorities are allocated to the political parties according to their proportional representation.
Anything else? --Saqib (talk) 08:43, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Update: Point # 1 has been resolved. Former members are now added to list under List_of_members_of_the_14th_National_Assembly_of_Pakistan#Membership_changes. --Saqib (talk) 11:43, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Dudley Miles (talk) 18:44, 5 September 2016 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Support. A first rate list. Dudley Miles (talk) 18:44, 5 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 22:04, 14 September 2016 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Support – I'm now comfortable that this list meets FL standards. Good work. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:04, 14 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Source review pass, I'm not going to bother writing the specifics. Promoting. --PresN 21:26, 21 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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