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List of World Heritage Sites in New Zealand

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Nominator(s): Tone 10:23, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

New Zealand has 3 WHS and 8 sites on the tentative list. Standard style. Since both Senegal and Ecuador lists have been promoted, this is the sole nominaton from my side at the moment. Tone 10:23, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

Commments

MPGuy2824

• ", it became in 1993 the first site" => ", in 1993 it became the first site"
• "between the people and the nature".
• "until the early 1980s but now survives" - Add a comma after "1980s"
• "is characterized by" - Use a different phrase.
• "maintains 8eight properties" - I think just the numeral was intended.
• "shaped by the volcanic activities" => "shaped by volcanic activity".
• I'm unsure whether "Te Whare Runanga" needs to be italicized or not.
• The image for "Kermadec Islands and Marine reserve" is missing alt-text.
• "November 22, 1984" - Convert to dmy format, for consistency.

-MPGuy2824 (talk) 10:54, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

Fixed, thanks! I added Māori meeting house to Te Whare Runanga, the article does not used italic. Tone 11:18, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• "The remaining glaciers are limited to the slopes of the Mount Ruapehu." => "The remaining glaciers are limited to the slopes of Mount Ruapehu."
• "the ancient Gondwana biota" - what's a "biota"? Never heard that word before.
• That's it! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:54, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

  Done. Biota refers to animal and plant life, I linked to biome, which is the most direct link. Tone 08:48, 11 October 2024 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:01, 11 October 2024 (UTC)