Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Uyanış: Büyük Selçuklu cast members/archive1

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The list was archived by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 31 May 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Uyanış: Büyük Selçuklu cast members

Featured list candidates/List of Uyanış: Büyük Selçuklu cast members/archive1

Nominator(s): Limorina (t • c) 06:06, 18 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'm nominating this article for featured list because I think it meets all of the featured list criteria when it comes to prose, lead, comprehensiveness, structure and stability. I'm not sure about style however because it contains quite a few redlinks. Limorina (t • c) 06:06, 18 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

For a featured list, this is sorely lacking in content. Consider a FL like List of The Mandalorian characters, which devotes several paragraphs for each main character to discuss characterization, casting, and other relevant details. I don't think a one- or two-line description of each character is going to cut it. There are also numerous issues with unclear or overly wordy prose, such as:

"After Barış Arduç was noted for meeting the producer of Uyanış: Büyük Selçuklu, he became one of the famous actors who were expected to join the cast."
"... the series focuses on the character portrayed by the member of the cast."
"Sezin Akbaşoğulları appears as Zübeyde Hatun, a character based on Zubayda Khatun, another one of Malik-Shah I's wives, the same is shown in the series."

Additionally, there are many pieces of irrelevant information scattered throughout the list, such as:

"Gülsoy was noted to have celebrated one of his birthday at the set of the series with his family."
"Şendil was noted to have praised the COVID-19 precautions made by Uyanış: Büyük Selçuklu."
"He [İlker Kızmaz] is shown as an important character in the series."

For now, I'm going to have to oppose due to lack of information and poor writing style. Given the scope of the issues, I would also suggest requesting a copyedit and finding more information about each character's personality, casting, etc. RunningTiger123 (talk) 20:35, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Limorina are you going to address these comments? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:05, 2 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll ping Limorina again, but their user page says they have retired, so I think this nomination may be stalled. RunningTiger123 (talk) 22:00, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Source comments

I'm not sure if the nominator is planning to return to this, but I two comments below:

All refs need dates (if they're available) and it seems a lot have them but are not listed. Refs 1–5 for example
If possible (it is not required, but definitely recommended) |trans-title= would help a lot with the Turkish refs

Limorina, if you return, please ping me and I'll do a formal source review. Aza24 (talk) 01:53, 11 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:29, 30 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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