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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by Matthewedwards 01:43, 10 May 2009 [1].
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The last of the Silver Slugger series. To all reviewers who have been so helpful in the promotion of the first six lists, I thank you. As with the DH list, it is half the size of the others! As these are completed, I will progress to WP:FTC. I appreciate all help and comments. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 11:48, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Truco
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- Support -- Previous issues resolved to meet WP:WIAFL.--Truco 00:42, 24 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments - Only a few minor things to clear up before I support. Good luck with the topic.
Move reference 5 to be after the comma."Mike Hampton has won the most Silver Slugger Awards as a pitcher; he won five consecutive awards with four different teams from 1999 to 2003." Redundant use of "won". Perhaps change the punctuation and use "winning"?"Hampton has hit the most home runs in a pitcher's Silver Slugger-winning season; he hit seven in 2001." Here, "hit" is repeated. Personally, I like the "with" setup for numbers in the other lists, and later in this one. How about some variant of that.Giants2008 (17-14) 21:17, 25 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Done all. I don't know HOW I missed that first one... KV5 (Talk • Phils) 21:28, 25 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Support - Looks fine now. Great work on this series. Giants2008 (17-14) 00:06, 27 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
"Hampton's 1999 on-base percentage is also a record " Besides being unnecessary, "also" is confusing since it sounds as if you've referred to his on-base percentage before.
- Sigh. Reworded. Done. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 21:51, 1 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"Orel Hershiser leads pitchers in batting average, with the .356 mark he set in 1993.[14] Micah Owings is the slugging percentage leader (.683 in 2007)." So Orel Hershiser leads pitchers in general, or just Silver Slugger-winning pitchers? Same with Owings.Dabomb87 (talk) 23:05, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 21:51, 1 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 23:05, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 17:30, 8 May 2009 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Support The Rambling Man (talk) 17:30, 8 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.