Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Bleach episodes (season 3)

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The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 19:06, 7 October 2008 [1].

List of Bleach episodes (season 3)

After a long while, I'm bringing another episode list to FLC. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 05:59, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments - sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:34, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I haven't looked at the page yet, but is the title correct for the Japanese season pages? The American and British TV shows do simply "Bleach (season 3)" Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 00:21, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It's the style that's always been used (and has been used for other anime episode lists). I was under the impression that [Series name] (season X) was for season articles trying for featured article status and that List of..(season X) lists were for those trying for featured list status. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 00:26, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:41, 27 September 2008 (UTC) [reply]

Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

~~"The Bleach Soul Society: The Rescue arc is the third season..." Are you sure that the first "the" is necessary?~~
- Take it as "The arc is..." as versus "Arc is...". Needs the article. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 17:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~"the title of the season is simply The Rescue." Simply seems a bit subjective, why don't you use the phrase from the season 2 FL: "...the title is translated as..."~~
- Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 17:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~"The plot of the episodes centers"-->The episodes' plot centers...~~
- Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 17:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~Why are the dates unlinked in the prose but linked in the table? Is the date linking necessary (remember, date linking is now deprecated by the MOS)?~~
~~"Hitsugaya and Ichimaru begin to fight, with Ichimaru eventually overpowering Hitsugaya." Awkward structure.~~
- Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 17:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~"Afterwards, Yoruichi shows Ichigo a device that allowed her to fly," Shouldn't it be "give" instead of "show"?~~
- I don't see where this line is in the article. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 17:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - *bangs head on desk* Sorry, I had two similar lists open in separate windows. Disregard this. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:41, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~"Renji travels to Rukia's execution area, but meets his captain, Byakuya Kuchiki." False contrast, how does meeting the captain contradict the traveling to the execution?~~ Dabomb87 (talk) 13:43, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Think that's everything. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 17:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)))[reply]

Comments from Gary King (talk · contribs)

"After a clipshow episode" → "After a clip show" – -show and episode are synonymous

Gary King (talk) 03:29, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 03:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Looks good, there's not much else to say. A couple of the individual episode summaries were worded a bit awkwardly, but since those are minor fixes I performed them myself. --erachima talk 03:41, 1 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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