Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Killswitch Engage discography

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The list was promoted by User:Scorpion0422 01:46, 6 December 2008 [1].

Killswitch Engage discography

Something made by someone. Canniba loki 15:41, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved review from SRX [TRUco]

~~Oppose~~

The Westfield, Massachusetts-based metalcore group, Killswitch Engage was formed in 1999, and after sign with Ferret label, released its self-titled full-length debut a year later. - Change sign to signing.
They sign a record deal with Roadrunner Records, releasing Alive or Just Breathing in 2002. - This needs a transition like They then.. Also change sign to signed.
The End of Heartache appeared in 2004 and peaked at #21 on the Billboard 200—which is their highest chart position in the United States to date—and sold 38,000 copies in its first week of release. - Reword to The End of Heartache appeared on the Billboard 200 in 2004 peaking at #21—which is their highest chart position in the United States to date—and sold 38,000 copies in its first week of release. Another thing, the dash does not work well between date and the word and. Either split the sentence or use a comma/semi-colon. In addition, to date is WP:WEASEL, give exact year (i.e. 2008).
The album was certified gold by Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) in 2007, for more than 500,000 copies sold. - reword The album was certified gold by Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) in 2007 for the sale of more than 500,000 copies.
Later that year, the band issued its first DVD, (Set This) World Ablaze, which contain a live concert in their hometown, a documentary, and all music videos from 2002 to 2004. - Change contain to contained. Add their before music videos.
The DVD was certified gold by RIAA in 2006 for 50,000 copies sold. - Reword The DVD was certified gold by RIAA in 2006 for the sale of 50,000 copies.
Their fourth studio album As Daylight Dies, was released later that year and peaked at #32 on the Billboard 200 with 60,000 sales in its first week. - Comma before the album name.
Did the singles only chart on the US Main.? Plus is this an appropriate abbreviation for the chart?--TRU_CO 01:54, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support - after my resolved review, the list now meets WP:WIAFL standards.--TRU_CO 21:29, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support: Looks good! I just have one little nitpick. Maybe notes could be added to references that take the reader to a database, telling them what should be entered into the search engine and where? I've seen it added to other discographies. -- Underneath-it-All (talk) 23:30, 26 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Canniba loki 02:41, 27 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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