Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Degrassi: The Next Generation (season 6)
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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted 21:33, 15 April 2008.
Another season list. Any comments or concerns raised will be addressed. Thank you. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 02:24, 31 March 2008 (UTC) Support as nominatior -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 14:30, 31 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- "it wasn't until " avoid contractions.
- "at 9:30," p.m. missing? I think there's more than one of these...
- "broadcast episode twelve to fifteen " episodes...
- "broadcast episode twelve to fifteen before it aired episode thirteen" 12 to 15 contains 13... little reword here.
- Link weed to marijuana.
- "as a auto mechanic"...
- " she can't keep " see above.
- "confronts them, which results in his death " No full stop but this needs a bit of a reword to explain how it resulted in his death.
- "is in sorrow. " "is in mourning."?
- "jeopardising " -probably needs a zee?
- "DVD release of season five " season six!
That's it from me. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:43, 31 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- All done. Thank you for the review -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 14:30, 31 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Support, sorry for the delay... The Rambling Man (talk) 07:41, 15 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Looking good.
- marked the first death in the series of a main character - it's picky, but seems to read better as "the first death of a main character in the series"
- Publication names in Reception such as Winnipeg Sun should be italicised.
- Episodes: "dad" to "father" and "mom" to "mother"?
- her feelings for current boyfriend Peter, and her ex-boyfriend, Sean - latter comma, or even both, not necessary.
- Pick "webpage" or "web page" and sweep through the article for some consistency.
- Ellie's ex, Jesse - maybe "ex-boyfriend" is a little more encyclopedic.
- Hope the comments helped! —97198 talk 12:58, 9 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for spotting those. They've all been addressed. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 16:12, 9 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Support This list needs to move along out of the WP:FLC backlogs, where other articles need more attention :) Gary King (talk) 03:46, 15 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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