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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Sarastro1 via FACBot (talk) 20:07, 13 September 2017 [1].

Revival (comics)[edit]

Nominator(s): Argento Surfer (talk) 15:14, 27 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the comic book Revival, published by Image Comics between 2012 and 2017. It passed GA in June 2017 and has been stable since. Argento Surfer (talk) 15:14, 27 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aoba47
  • The infobox image requires ALT text.
    • done.
  • In the lead, identify who described the comic as "a rural noir" and add the source that supports this quote.
    • I revised it to "described by its creators as". The citation in in the Early Inspriation section.
  • In the "Plot summary" section, do you think you should include a link to Wausau, Wisconsin? It is linked in the "Production" section, but the place is first used in this section so I would move the link up here.
    • Done - the sections got shuffled during GAR, and I didn't catch this. Thanks.
  • I would put the acronym CDC in parenthesis directly after Center for Disease Control, just to make it absolutely clear that the acronym is referencing this.
    • done.
  • In the phrase (referred to as "creeps" in Seeley’s scripts), clearly identify Seeley with his full name and a short descriptive phrase and link him. Remember that the lead and the body of the article should be treated separately so things linked in the lead will have to be linked again in the body of the article.
    • done.
  • In the first paragraph of the "Early inspiration" subsection, please fully introduce Norton with the full name and add a link.
    • done.

Great work with this article; once my comments are addressed, I will support it. I hope you are having a wonderful day so far. Aoba47 (talk) 15:05, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: Corrections made, thanks for the input. My day's been quite nice so far, and I hope yours has been as well! Argento Surfer (talk) 15:31, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you for your quick responses, and my day is pretty good so far. This was a very interesting and enjoyable read. I will support this for promotion. Good luck with the rest of this process. If possible, I would greatly appreciate it if you could look at my current FAC? Aoba47 (talk) 15:33, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Image review
  • File:RevivalComic1.jpg: The image use makes sense in the context of the article, and all aspects of the Non-free media information and use rationale box are fully completed to explain the rationale for the image.

This is a very easy image review as there is only one image used in the article at the time that I am writing this. I believe that passes the image review. If any additional images are added to the body of the article during the nomination, I will update this and review those image as well. Either way, wonderful work. Aoba47 (talk) 17:51, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • I agree with your assessment that I think the second image is the best out of the four as it is a single image. However, I think any of them will work fine in the article. Just make to sure to connect it in with the article/critical commentary. Aoba47 (talk) 16:09, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by 1989[edit]

  • "originally published" I would remove the first word.
  • done
  • The format is ongoing? The lead said it ended.
  • In comics, Ongoing series is a format distinct from a limited series. Even though the story has been ended, it was not planned to have a fixed number of issues.
  • I would put square brackets around ...
  • done
  • Who's "letterer Crank!"?
  • "was announced February 12, 2014 and released May 2014"
  • not sure what the issue was here, but I've specified the date as May 28 and added the word "on" before both dates.
  • "In January 2013, a group of retailers who commission exclusive "Phantom Variant" covers to provide additional attention to series they believe deserve more support selected Revival to be part of the project." This sentence doesn't sound right.
  • I've reworded it to "In January 2013, the Phantom group, retailers who commission exclusive covers to provide additional attention to series they believe deserve more support, selected Revival to be part of the project." I agree it's clunky, but there's not an article for the Phantom group and their mission statement is hard to summarize. Other suggestions are very welcome.
  • "Because of the declining sales, Seeley expressed skepticism about doing a project of similar length in the future" You're missing something.
  • Clarified, hopefully.
  • "A fourth hardcover collecting the rest of the series is scheduled for release in June 2017." It's August now.
  • It was released in June. Updated.
  • "8.1/10" I'd change the slash to "out of".
  • done
  • Kois described Norton's art as "wonderfully specific and evocative of the rural Midwest"
  • Added a period.
  • "Tonic found the subtle background detail added to her understanding of the characters." Doesn't sound right.
  • added "such as music posters and the cleanliness of bedrooms"
  • "a satisfying conclusion for longtime readers." I'd move the period.
  • "every plot thread that has been hanging out there in a satisfying manner." I'd move the period.
  • done
  • "was nominated for Best Cover Artist in 2013 and 2015 in part because of her work on Revival." In part?
  • she does covers for multiple titles each month, and Revival was one of three or four listed with her nomination.
  • "Screen Panel released four prints based on Revival October 25, 2014."
  • not sure what the concern was here - I added the word "on" before the date.

When my concerns are resolved, I'll check back. -- 1989 21:35, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@1989: Thanks for the input. I believe I've addressed or responded to your concerns. Argento Surfer (talk) 13:17, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Support @Argento Surfer: When you get a chance, could you review Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Dragon Ball (manga)/archive1? -- 1989 13:21, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Ian[edit]

Recusing coord duties, not much of a comic fan, and never seen this one, but you can't knock a bit of horror-SF so happy to have a look...

  • Found the prose to be in generally good shape but let me know if I misinterpreted anything in my copyedit; outstanding points:
    • Others believe they can absorb the revivers' immortality by ingesting their flesh, leading to an active smuggling business that moves body parts of revivers and other recently dead individuals. -- just to clarify, immediately before this we're told the revivers are effectively immortal and heal from all wounds, so are we saying people like to chop off bits of revivers for profit, but the revivers heal, meaning it's a kind of gruesome win-win situation?
      • That's exactly what happens. One of the revivers died from a heroin overdose, and his suppliers keep him stoned while they continuously cut off strips of meat. Should I clarify that in the prose? Argento Surfer (talk) 12:15, 21 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    • In Production you say that in 2015 the creators "decided to end Revival at issue 48" but elsewhere (infobox, Publication history) it's 47 issues, with no specific explanation I could see for the reduction.
      • I wasn't sure how to address this - the source says 48, but my best guess is that either 1) sales fell further faster and they cut it short or 2) They said that before the scripts were done and it wrapped up faster than they expected. I thought about not specifying "48," but couldn't find an appropriate way to word it. Any suggestion is welcome. Argento Surfer (talk) 12:15, 21 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Article structure seems logical, and the level of detail reasonable.
  • I haven't looked at source reliability/formatting, so will withhold final judgement until that happens, but so far I'm leaning to support.

Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:53, 21 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Source review from Ealdgyth[edit]

I'm afraid I'm going to have to Oppose due to the high number of questionable sources used in the article.
Otherwise everything looks good. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:58, 26 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I've offered explanations for the points raised. The sources may not all be the New York Times, but they're reliable sources about comic books. Argento Surfer (talk) 13:33, 28 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I understand the concern with some of these sources, and admit that I will not be able to satisfy your conditions for a large number of them. However, I believe their content is accurate and valuable. If I have to choose between removing the material or not receiving your support for FA, then I'd prefer to retain the content. Argento Surfer (talk) 12:46, 30 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Coordinator comment: With an oppose on sourcing, I'm leaning towards archiving this, particularly as the two supports are of the more cursory type of review that comic articles sometimes accumulate. Ian, I don't know if you want to weigh in on the sourcing (and I promise to stop pinging you soon!) Sarastro1 (talk) 19:10, 31 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Heh, no prob re. the pinging! Yeah, this is why I generally hold off support until source and image reviews are done -- not being a comic expert I can't really weigh in on the reliability of the questioned refs, and I have to agree with Ealdgyth that the source of an interview is as important as the subject in determining reliability. Much as I'd like to support this interesting and well-written article, I can't while we have an impasse over sourcing. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 01:36, 1 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • I've replaced the tumbler source
  • ComicsAlliance won an Eisner Award for journalism in 2015.
  • Comic Book Resources won Eisners for journalism in 2009, 2011, and 2014.
  • Newsarama won an Eisner for journalism in 2008.
  • Multiversity was nominated for an Eisner in journalism in 2014 and 2015
  • Comics Beat is run by Heidi McDonald, who was also an editor at Publishers Weekly and has been recognized as reliable by other reliable sources.
  • For the SKTCHED source, the writer (David Harper) is regularly referenced by other reliable sources.
  • Bleeding Cool has been referenced by other reliable sources.
  • Sequart has been recognized by reliable sources for doing scholarly work and documentaries.
  • I never got a response on the retailer links that are being used to source facts about themselves. Are those ok?
  • sciencefiction.com has been removed
  • Graphic Policy has been replaced
  • @Ealdgyth: If the above explanations are acceptable, I'll re-evaluate the remainders on the list. The sources in the review section are sourcing the reviewer's opinions. I'm not sure I'll be able to find high quality replacements that will be comprehensive and neutral - negative opinions don't get published much when you're talking about a niche genre in a niche medium. Argento Surfer (talk) 14:26, 1 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Closing comment: Given that there is a standing oppose on sourcing, and given the length of time that this review has been open, I am going to archive this shortly. It can be renominated after the usual two-week waiting period and I would recommend that the nominator works with Ealdgyth in that time to clear up any remaining sourcing issues. Sarastro1 (talk) 20:06, 13 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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