Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Marching Through Georgia/archive1

Marching Through Georgia

Featured article candidates/Marching Through Georgia/archive1

Nominator(s): DannyRogers800 (talk) 13:40, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Seeing that this article has just been awarded GA status (thanks to @Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs)), I am confident to nominate it as a featured article candidate. "Marching Through Georgia" is a prominent song from the Civil War era penned by one of America's finest composers, Henry Work. It was great fun working on this. DannyRogers800 (talk) 13:40, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

History6042's comments

"One of few Civil War compositions" -> "One of the few Civil War compositions" History6042😊 (Contact me) 21:34, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"commemorative song which would become the campaign's unofficial theme tune" -> "commemorative song that would become the campaign's unofficial theme tune" History6042😊 (Contact me) 21:34, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"Civil War; Journalist Irwin Silber comments" -> "Civil War; journalist Irwin Silber comments" History6042😊 (Contact me) 21:34, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"On November 15 62,000 Union" -> "On November 15, 62,000 Union" History6042😊 (Contact me) 21:34, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"was one of few wartime compositions" -> "was one of the few wartime compositions" History6042😊 (Contact me) 21:34, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
If these issues are fixed then I support at least for the grammar and prose. History6042😊 (Contact me) 21:34, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Very good suggestions; the errors should all be fixed. DannyRogers800 (talk) 22:36, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

HF

I'll review this soon. Hog Farm _Talk 02:20, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

As a starter note, IMDB is user-generated and should not be cited. Hog Farm _Talk 02:25, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed, although I'm not sure if the new citation for El Dorado is any good. DannyRogers800 (talk) 14:34, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

If a reliable secondary source cannot be found, I would remove the information as undue detail. Hog Farm _Talk 14:47, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, I removed the El Dorado reference entirely. DannyRogers800 (talk) 14:49, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Image review

Captions that aren't complete sentences shouldn't end in periods

Don't use fixed px size

Suggest adding alt text

File:Savannah_Campaign.png: what is the source of the data presented in this map?

File:"Marching_Through_Georgia"_by_Henry_C._Work_–_sung_by_Harlan_%26_Stanley_(1904).ogg: what is the author's date of death?

File:William_T._Sherman,_c._1860–1870.jpg: when and where was this first published? Nikkimaria (talk) 06:10, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for this criticism. I'll work on it later on today. DannyRogers800 (talk) 08:49, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Captions have been and alt text has been added. Regarding px size, I had to keep the dimensions of the lead image and the March to the Sea graphics fixed as they would otherwise be too small. The rest have been arranged. Onto the media issues. The data on the map is not listed; I don't know if this invalidates it or not. The authors of the recording have all been dead for over 70 years: Harlan died in 1936 and Stanley in 1910. The Sherman portrait was adapted from another Wikimedia file; it was published some time between 1860 and 1870 and in the United States—that's all I know. DannyRogers800 (talk) 14:39, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]