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- Nominator(s): Harper J. Cole (talk) 01:07, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
This article is about former NFL quarterback Dan Fouts, a member of the Pro Football Hall of Fame.
It's my second attempt to promote this article, having failed in 2022.[1] Criticisms of that version of the article included the structure, a narrative that drifted away from Fouts, a lack of proofreading and an over-reliance on statistical databases as sources.
This version is substantially changed, and has received a copyedit. Statistical databases are only used in the stats section of the article and not in the main body. I've also removed some material and added events that I missed the first time around. It should now be closer to a pass than last time.
Harper J. Cole (talk) 01:07, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Image review
- Don't use fixed pixel size. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:20, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Now corrected. Harper J. Cole (talk) 14:54, 1 January 2025 (UTC)