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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by Hog Farm via FACBot (talk) 18 May 2022 [1].


Nominator(s): Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:25, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about one of the rarest birds I've been lucky enough to see. Scoured sources. Got a thorough GA review. I think it is within striking distance of FA-hood. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:25, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments Support from WA8MTWAYC

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AK

Support from Gog the Mild

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Recusing to review.

Rereading and knowing in advance what is meant, it still (really) isn't clear (to me) that "this" is breeding. It is possible that you are trying to cram too much into the one sentence?
Crystal clear IMO.

Wonderful stuff. Gog the Mild (talk) 14:50, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Just the one minor issue left, above. Gog the Mild (talk) 16:48, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Source review by Mike Christie

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Footnote numbers refer to this version.

  • You're inconsistent about including publisher locations in book sources. [4] and [5] have locations; none of the others do: [6], [9], [12], [13], [15], [17], [24], [26].
    dammit, must have missed them. removed now Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:20, 5 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • For [20], the archive link takes me to a page without the relevant information; if I can reach the right page by searching using the form on that page, I'd suggest adding a "loc=" parameter so the reader knows how to find the source.
    updated the page now Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:42, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sources are reliable; there are old sources but they're used appropriately. No other formatting errors. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:28, 2 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pass. Looks good. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:57, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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