The Toyota Land Cruiser has achieved iconic status in Australia, South America and Africa as the unkillable 4x4, but this article says nothing about that. It's just a laundry list of model specs. Any Australian would be baffled at how little narrative we've managed to put around this. --Guy (Help!) 12:09, 16 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This article makes it clear that it discusses a central issue in both the daily lives of Kenyans and the country's international relations, but it needs a lot more references and statistics. It also needs a lot more historical context than its current sources (two news articles and the CIA World Factbook) can provide. I've done what I can to improve it, but it's well outside my specialty. --NeonMerlin07:42, 17 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This article is on an important fundamental term in simple mathematics but it was written by a mathematician. It is not understandable to the common reader. An older comment on the talk page states ″This should be translated into English!″Tucoxn (talk) 08:43, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The Islamic Golden Age is a pretty large and well documented article, but the Indian Golden Age is just a few paragraphs. The era gave us Chess, the Kama Sutra and even the concept of zero! Originally I was looking for a book on Amazon about this golden age but there was also a lack of options there, as they have a number of Islamic Golden Age books but none on India's.
