User talk:Zzzzzjessica/Doubanjiang
Preliminary Review from Kaylea
[edit]Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.
I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you. One area to improve for this article is your use of sources and citations. Finding more sources will help you add text -- but as you find sources, make sure you evaluate them based on Wikipedia's standards for reliability. You might find these sources collected by WikiProject Food and Drink to be useful: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Food_and_drink/Tools/sources
Kaylea Champion (talk) 21:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer Review from Alison
[edit]Hi Jessica!
I read your article and I really like it! I made some suggestions hahaha I hope you wouldn’t mind.
feedback on progress
[edit]Hi @Zzzzzjessica:
One thing that would help this article is fixing this source: "a geographical indication (GI) protected product, with its quality assessment standards last published in 2005. It states" -- and then there's a missing reference. I think this is a policy or regulation from China that sets out how products can be made (France does similar things with some types of wine and cheese)? Can you find a reference? Or is there an existing Wikipedia article that talks about this? Because it's a big chunk of the facts you are sharing, it needs a cite.
You are going in a good direction, but I think the article needs more in order to meet our goal of improving it by a quality class.
The good news is, look at all of these sources: https://scholar.google.com/scholar?hl=en&as_sdt=0%2C48&q=doubanjiang&btnG=
There's lots to choose from. Some are hard to read if you are not a chemist. But these might be readable:
https://doi.org/10.1016/j.lwt.2021.111723 https://doi.org/10.1016/j.foodcont.2019.106922
It looks like the library owns copies of these journals, if you use the UW proxy bookmarklet they should pop right up for you.
There are also some articles where a journalist explains scientific results --
https://go-gale-com.offcampus.lib.washington.edu/ps/i.do?p=ITOF&u=wash_main&id=GALE%7CA654927465&v=2.1&it=r https://go-gale-com.offcampus.lib.washington.edu/ps/i.do?p=ITOF&u=wash_main&id=GALE%7CA619495286&v=2.1&it=r
I found quite a few things by searching doubanjiang on the library website. It just takes a bit of digging.
Good luck and keep working!
Kaylea Champion (talk) 05:55, 12 February 2022 (UTC)
Go Live Approval
[edit]You're approved to go live with this article. Good work.
We talked about whether to leave the brand references in there -- you explained that most of them were pre-existing, and that the only one you added had a citation. I'd just leave it for now, I'm not an expert in the style of food and drink articles like this one.
As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:
- Final read-through draft.
- Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
- Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
- Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
- Note on article talk page.
- Note at the top of your sandbox version.
- Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
- Celebrate!