User talk:Zaz70SFjUhDfNQb/Computer animation
Working on this
[edit]Hey, I'm going to put a few thoughts here so we can collaboratively improve this.
- The "Pseudocode" section has to go. It's too technical for the average reader.
- I thing the "Future" section needs to be either extremely well-referenced or removed. (It reads like WP:OR)
- The lead needs to be rewritten so it doesn't sound like a dictionary definition.
- The general tone needs work.
- If possible, it would be nice if all of the sections related to full-length articles elsewhere.
I'd be happy to help after the fact, but it's up to you Adam McCormick (talk) 23:00, 15 January 2008 (UTC)