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Pre-Edit Peer Review

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Name of student reviewer ** Wikipedia User: Aaleksanian
Date of review 5/5/2013
Name of editor Wikipedia User: Xyzbb1253
URL of editor’s Userpage http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Xyzbb1253/sandbox/article1
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/5/2013
Date review submitted to instructor 5/5/2013
Length of edit (too long/too short) Good length
Image (needed/appropriate) Image not needed
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) The information provided was accurate from the article
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) N/A
Wikiformatting Nice formatting
Grammar & composition Well done
Other comments Great job!
Name of student reviewer Wikipedia User: DJames5
Date of review 5/6/13
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Xyzbb1253
URL of editor’s Userpage http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Xyzbb1253/sandbox/article1
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/6/13
Date review submitted to instructor 5/6/13
Length of edit (too long/too short) Good length
Image (needed/appropriate) n/a
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) Accurate
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed Yes
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) n/a
Wikiformatting Fine
Grammar & composition Good
Other comments None
Reviewer's Signature

DJames5 (talk) 16:41, 6 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User: Trinirebel (talk) 18:06, 8 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Date of review 5/8/13
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Xyzbb1253
URL of editor’s Userpage http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Xyzbb1253/sandbox/article1
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/8/13
Date review submitted to instructor 5/8/13
Length of edit (too long/too short) Good length
Image (needed/appropriate) n/a
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) Accurate
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed Yes
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) n/a
Wikiformatting Good formatting
Grammar & composition Good
Other comments None
Reviewer's Signature Trinirebel (talk) 18:06, 8 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Name of student reviewer * Wikipedia User:M.Caban
Date of review 5/8/2013
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User: Xyzbb1253
URL of editor’s Userpage http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Xyzbb1253/sandbox/article1
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/8/2013
Date review submitted to instructor 5/8/2013
Length of edit (too long/too short) Good length
Image (needed/appropriate) Image not needed.
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) Information is accurate
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed yes
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) N/A
Wikiformatting Nice format
Grammar & composition None found
Other comments very good job


Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

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Name of student reviewer Wikipedia User:Angela Sandy
Date of review 5/13/2013
Name of editor Wikipedia User:Xyzbb1253
URL of editor’s Userpage http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Xyzbb1253
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 05/13/13
Date review submitted to instructor 05/13/13
Length of edit (too long/too short) The length of the article is sufficient
Image (needed/appropriate) n/a
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) Textbook information is accurate
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) The article is accurate for I/O Psych
Wikiformatting Solid content and good choice on adding bullets
Grammar & composition Grammar & compostition is good!
Other comments Good job!

Angela Sandy (talk) 04:17, 14 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]