User talk:WxNYG
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Peer Review - Separatist Feminism
[edit]Hi there! I think your edits were cleverly modest, yet much needed. I feel one sentence, however, could be worded differently. ""The Michigan Womyn's Music Festival, or "Michfest", is a yearly music festival taking place every summer."" What about, "...is a yearly music festival which takes place each summer." Great focus, though, in providing a better sentence and wording structure for the article. It was a great cleanup! Get BOLD and start finding stubs and really getting yourself out there! I look forward to seeing more edits from you! ℳ.ℳ. BionicTwinkie (talk) 03:11, 9 November 2014 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]I tend to agree with BionicTwinkie about your edits. I think they were very clear and concise and I commend your ability to add fresh information to an article that was already somewhat lengthy. I know I for one realized how much research it takes to find new information for an article. Including internal links to related Wikipedia articles is always very helpful and I think it is great that you upheld this practice. Overall, even though your edits were short, they were valuable and definitely improved the article. Jenniwisniewski (talk) 01:54, 10 November 2014 (UTC)