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Your submission at Articles for creation: Pinball FX (December 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Vrxces were:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Currently not in a state to enter mainspace as it broadly doesn't conform to the manual of style and may not be notable. Happy to provide more specific feedback, but the key things that stand out are that: (1) the article lacks significant coverage, particularly review coverage, from reliable video game sources, given the two reviews cited are considered unreliable; (2) there's a fairly high-amount of references to and citations from user-generated coverage, such as YouTube interviews, reviews and features, which are generally not considered reliable coverage, at least not to substantiate notability; (3) there's a smidge of non-neutral writing and promotional tone to this that suggests authorship from someone affiliated with the game, namely the sheer amount of specific details about the tables and company and; (4) generally a lack of citations for large aspects of the article. Happy to chat more about this on my talk page if you need guidance.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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ＶＲＸＣＥＳ (talk) 05:02, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Wilbers! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ＶＲＸＣＥＳ (talk) 05:02, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pinball FX (2023 video game) has been accepted

Pinball FX (2023 video game), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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ＶＲＸＣＥＳ (talk) 21:02, 3 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

January 2025

Hello, I'm Waxworker. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, The Addams Family (pinball), but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Waxworker (talk) 13:55, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Pinball FX

I was working on a page for this game awhile ago here. https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Draft:Pinball_FX_(2022_video_game) I had no idea you created a page.Wikieditor9117 (talk) Wikieditor9117 (talk) 19:43, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]