User talk:WikiEmz

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Hello Emma!

Time to wake up.... SofiaSaghir (talk) 09:59, 5 February 2019 (UTC)

No. WikiEmz (talk) 10:03, 5 February 2019 (UTC)

Have a nap

Amyrussell1 (talk) 10:01, 5 February 2019 (UTC)

That's a great shout. WikiEmz (talk) 10:03, 5 February 2019 (UTC)

Hi girl

I hope you have a lovely day

You deserve it

Thanks for all the music

Love you x

Cxssbailey (talk) 10:02, 5 February 2019 (UTC)

Hi! I hope you have the best day, with plenty of naps and treats and bops. Love you too x WikiEmz (talk) 10:04, 5 February 2019 (UTC)

Hello from me!

Thank you for coming along today. Don't forget to do the Sandbox tutorial in the Dashboard, and I'll see you next week! Cbderbylib (talk) 12:24, 5 February 2019 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

	The Copyeditor's Barnstar
	A copyeditor barnstar for you, for a great start! Cbderbylib (talk) 12:27, 5 February 2019 (UTC)

Bridge of Clay

So, your article is overall very good. It could do with a brief copy edit as there are a few missing punctuation marks and some grammatical errors. There is also some uses of colloquial language that could be changed. Your lead section is probably a little bit too short and it could do with some expansion. You could maybe include the genre and maybe some more about the publication history. Jenny says that it could use some padding but I'm not entirely sure what that means. Your article overall was well organised in good sections. You could maybe add more information to different sections such as the sales section, awards sections and the publication process section. You could also use more wikilinks throughout the whole thing as it is used quite sparingly. Your article is well balanced with both positive and negative reviews but you could use some more sources in the sale section and the character list section (I don't know what source you would use there but there must be something somewhere that refers to the characters). The other main thing for your feedback is that the image used and the long quotes used may be a copyright violation. I know you didn't add those but you could potentially remove them so that the article does not breach copyright issues.

Overall, great article. I think it's well done but here are some areas for improvement from me and your classmates.

Sofia Saghir :) SofiaSaghir (talk) 11:35, 26 March 2019 (UTC)