User talk:Whatischemistry/Foreign body reaction
Hello Daniel, in this peer review I just want to say thaat you have made a good amountt of progress. However, I do think thaat you need to add more to your article. The lead in your article need more body and I think it is still too simple. You could quickly discuss types of body reaction too. I also think that you need to add more to your content so that each sub-heading is explain carefully. You could also use tables in your article to make your article more eye-appealing. I really like how you organize your article and all the sources work. Instead of having the same sources in one sub-heading, may be research more. Good job!
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