User talk:West Mich Stu/Pyloromyotomy
Lead accurately describes the purpose of the article and does so well in one sentence. You have a decent summary to outline the rest of the article. I would expand briefly on the purpose of the procedure, maybe have a subheading saying "indications"? Your article is written really well thus far, I can read through the aspects of the procedure, when open v lap is preferred and I get a general sense of the surgical steps. You have really strong references and I know I can rely on your article as I read through it. Overall, fantastic job dude, you're crushing it!
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