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Williamjiang0816 (talk) 00:12, 30 November 2021 (UTC) First of all, the choice of the first picture is very good, it captures the shelter, which is also consistent with the article, but the picture does not show that the Greek people are taking refuge, fortunately the title helps explain. The second picture is about the industrial age, and the title is also related to the picture, but you could pick a picture of pollution.[reply]

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Malakig515: I like the word choices and sentence structure throughout this entry that make this seem like a legit professionally done article entry. The pictures are also nice having good correlation with the paragraphs aside them and the citations under the photos help to explain more, especially the Greek one.