User talk:Warlord10327!
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[edit]Hello, Warlord10327!, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:22, 6 September 2016 (UTC)
You have an overdue training assignment.
[edit]Please complete the assigned training modules. --Ctysick (talk) 14:47, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
Feedback request
[edit]Hi Warlord. I took a look at your sandbox draft. It's a nice start, but there are a few things you need to bear in mind.
- Remember that Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. Articles should not be addressed to the reader; if you find yourself using "I", "we", "us," or "you", it's a good sign that you may be on the wrong track in terms of the tone of the article. You also need to make sure that you keep opinions out of your writing - "not that hard to do" is an opinion, and it is addressed to the reader.
- Quotes need to be kept to a minimum. You should be reporting what sources say, and doing it in your own words.
- Don't forget that every statement should have a supporting citation, so that the reader can connect the statement with the source. At minimum, each paragraph should have one reference, and the reference should come at the very end of the paragraph. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:56, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
D-D Inertial Fusion
[edit]Thank you for contributing the article D-D Inertial Fusion. You've made a good start, but it's not quite ready to be an article yet, so I've moved it back to your userspace and you can find and edit it at User:Warlord10327!/D-D Inertial Fusion or continue to edit it in your sandbox.
Have a look at Editing Wikipedia, our short guide for student editors. Articles should reflect the format described starting on page 7, especially the part about the lead section which summarizes the article. Try to ensure that the article is divided into clear sections and use complete sentences.
You have cited some excellent sources but they need to be in the proper citation format and attached as footnotes to the relevant sections of your article. Our module about Sources and Citations will show you how to do this.
Please contact me on by user talk page if you have any questions. Rob (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:03, 20 October 2016 (UTC)