User talk:Veryhappybubbles!/Agricultural chemistry
Peer review of sandbox draft
[edit]Hi Veryhappybubbles!,
Please take a look at the peer review I've done for your article. I think you've made great progress on expanding some of the content mentioned, but I don't think you've made "non-trivial" improvements yet. This is mostly because existing portions of the article are still missing citations, and the additions you added only use a maximum of two citations. I think finding more citations (for all sections) and rearranging the existing content (ie. not the things you added) so that it is expanded on or removed from the article will allow the topic to be more focused. However, I really like the points you chose to expand upon and I like the overarching theme of improving crops and food quality. I think if you continue in that direction, it will be clear that agricultural chemistry works to improve crops and food. One final note is that the article is still lacking images. I've left suggestions in my peer review if you get stuck with figuring out what to add. Good luck on editing the rest of your article!