User talk:Vcheng52/sandbox

Because your sources aren’t formatted in the required way it is difficult for me to tell if they are from journals, or what journals they are from. You need to include Last name, First Initial (Year). Article title, Journal Title, Volume (Issue), Page numbers. Some sentences that should be sourced don’t have a reference (like the first sentence). Anything that you didn’t make up should have a source. I am not sure this sentence is accurate – suggest double checking “Miscommunications between pilots and air traffic control is the primary factor in fatal airplane crashes, airspace incidents, runway incursion, and mid-air collisions”. In your bullets, 5 have definitions and “Comprehension” only has a word – is a definition available for this as well? Very good effort Skearns4 (talk) 17:28, 27 October 2015 (UTC)