User talk:VQuiche/Online piracy
Subheadings and Media
[edit]Hi, thank you for letting me peer-review your article! I noticed you added a lot more history in the article, and it made it a lot more interesting to read. I enjoyed seeing the depth of the origin of online piracy. I would say, that if you separated information into certain subheadings, it could make it a lot more clear for readers to find what they are looking for. Try to play around with adding images in the history, or images of logos for torrent sites and such! Good job, and good luck! Ijustinns (talk) 07:41, 1 February 2020 (UTC)
Hey! I also peer reviewed your article. Overall, you made some great additions I would just add more into those sections that are lacking information. Good luck! Adriel824 (talk) 11:52, 1 February 2020 (UTC)
Feedback on your article
[edit]Greetings VQuiche! I've looked over the changes you've made and they're reasonably extensive and seem mostly solid.
You might want to check out WP:LEDE since the lede of your article is incredibly short. I think increasing this as per that policy would be a big improvement.
I think you should perhaps give some attention to the feedback from others, give this another once-over, and then move these over whenever you're ready. —mako๛ 03:58, 13 February 2020 (UTC)
Feedback Review
[edit]https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:VQuiche/Online_piracy/Zarens_Peer_Review Solid content, really liked what I saw but might need to add more cites just to be safe. Zach (talk) 07:20, 17 February 2020 (UTC)