User talk:User357269

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Please complete your edits of Regular conditional probability. I am tempted to undo them, as words are clearly missing from the sentences, e.g. in

Consider two random variables X and Y, where the represents the roll of a die

Many thanks. AVM2019 (talk) 04:31, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah there's a typo there, it should say X instead of "the" in the bit you quote. Could you clarify what other mistakes you're seeing? I skimmed the article and looked mostly fine to me. User357269 (talk) 08:13, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

It is not clear what "rolling a die" has to do with the topic and how it contributes anything positive to the article. The version prior to your edits was more concise and clear in my opinion. I had an impression that you intended to make more changes, but stopped half-way for unrelated reasons. Regards, AVM2019 (talk) 18:28, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Published the edit today, please let me know if you have any comments. User357269 (talk) 23:34, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

I will leave the comments on the talk page, if I have any. Regards, AVM2019 (talk) 23:44, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]