User talk:Unbroken14/sandbox
Peer Editor[edit]
Hello Peer Editors,
Thank you for reviewing and editing my article. I just have a few quick notes for you. I am working on adding to a majority of my sections, specifically youth crime and youth politics. Just keep that in mind. Please let me know if there is any other content you would like to know if you were reading my article. Also please feel free to correct any spelling and grammar issues you see. Also I am aware that one of my sources is blank, I am working on getting that! Thanks again for your help.
Peer review[edit]
Hello! You have some solid info on your page. I went ahead and switched around some sentences, nothing major, in order to improve flow. Otherwise, looks great! Bulldog53420 (talk) 23:00, 9 November 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Prof.Vandegrift (talk • contribs)