User talk:Uambra

This user is a student editor in Illinois_Institute_of_Technology/Seminar_in_Human_Sexuality_(Fall_2021) .

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Hello, Uambra, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:08, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Article draft

I moved your draft back to your sandbox. If you want to add your work to the main sexual arousal article, please follow the instructions in the training module and merge your additions into that article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:05, 29 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I skimmed your additions a bit. It didn't get reverted from the article because it's poorly written, but because of the tone. It reads like an essay or blog post, like it's trying to convince the reader of something rather than dispassionately stating what the sources say. For example, your first sentence "The importance of orgasms is limitless and ordinary to society" is something that simply doesn't have a place on Wikipedia. It doesn't say anything of value and it can easily be removed entirely. I'd recommend reading some other Wikipedia articles and getting used to Wikipedia's neutral, "uncaring" tone. (Pro tip, if you can remove something without losing meaning, do so!)--Megaman en m (talk) 00:17, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]