User talk:Tyohann
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Hello, Tyohann, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 08:04, 24 January 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
This article seems like it is being developed well. You have a pretty good lead: it explains what the title of the Wiki page is about, and you it explains some of the basics aboout who made it and why. The article also does a great job of showing breadth and neutrality in tone. If anything could be improved, it would be adding more information to the other sections. If possible, you could also add more headings to provide more information. If you can find any more sources than the ones already used, feel free to use them, for they will add even more breadth and perspective to the article. Ewooten (talk) 11:01, 30 March 2017 (UTC)ewooten