User talk:Tonyeng434

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Hello, Tonyeng434, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:16, 18 September 2018 (UTC)

error response

Hello! Thank you for peer reviewing my article.

The edits you suggested actually refer to the research notes of the article. The full draft is visible on my sandbox page. Could you clarify your edits?

Thank you Charlotteaurelius (talk) 03:35, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

Nomination of Hygiene and Sanitation in Myanmar for deletion

A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Hygiene and Sanitation in Myanmar is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Hygiene and Sanitation in Myanmar until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. 1l2l3k (talk) 16:33, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Notes

Hi, I have some notes for your article:

• This must have in-line citations so that we can tell what sources go to which claims. Also, since this deals with a medical topic, I would review this training module. Keep in mind that studies are seen as primary sources and as such, should not be used unless it's accompanied by a secondary, independent source that places the findings in context. WP:MEDRS and the above training goes into this in more detail.
• This needs to be checked for grammatical errors and the like.
• The article should not contain original research. We can only summarize what has been explicitly stated in the source material.
• I would re-title this to the topic of "Water supply and sanitation in Myanmar", in keeping with similar articles at Water supply and sanitation in Ethiopia and Water supply and sanitation in India. Keep in mind that hygiene is often considered to be part of sanitation and as this does look to be about water supply as well, it should be re-titled if this is kept.

I think that it's possible to save the article, but this needs work before it would be safely out of risk of deletion. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:54, 26 November 2018 (UTC)