User talk:Tkracinski
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To begin with I thought the lead was an easy read and straight to the point. As a group you guys were able to hit all of the main points in just a few short compact sentences. For the lead I would suggest looking into a secondary source although referencing the website itself isn't bad and it still makes for an easy read. The history section was well written, it gives history and insight to some key individuals. There were some minor issues like organizing the information in order and some of the paragraphs don't necessarily read like a Wikipedia page. Also avoid being repetitive with previously mentioned information. The information in regards to funding is very thorough and well written, maybe consider fining more sources to to give some more background information about the different programs. As a reader I thought the article was full of information and each sections flows right into the next. Again some minor tweaks could be adding more sources for clarity and cleaning up the organization/wording in certain sections. Other than that great work you guys. 1KendalHarris (talk) 01:41, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
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