User talk:Tirotanpan

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Hello, Tirotanpan, and Welcome to Wikipedia!

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Hello, Tirotanpan, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:41, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Your draft

Hi. I moved your draft back to your sandbox, because it isn't ready to be published 'live' in Wikipedia's mainspace. I recommend that you read the "Editing Biographies" handout, which I've linked to here, for more help on what a Wikipedia biography should look like. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:49, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

Please don't move this article to mainspace until you have finished cleaning it up.

• You need to remove the section about article evaluation - that doesn't belong in mainspace
• You shouldn't have a list of references, they should be inline
• Inline references need to follow the statements they support, not come before them
• You need to break your work up into paragraphs and sections. A single paragraph like this is very hard to follow
• You need to make it more clear to people why this person is notable enough to have a Wikipedia article about them
• You need to copy-edit your work. For example, mother-in-law, not mother in low.

The lead needs to summarize the contents of the article. Right now, the lead has two main facts

was one of the narrator of the Clackmas Chinook story, and

she used her superior language skills to make the past history of Northwest Oregon known to the world

Neither of these facts are discussed in more detail in the body of the article. It also isn't clear that the "Clackmas Chinook story" is. Without that, without explaining what you mean by "superior language skills", and without going into details about how she "past history of Northwest Oregon known to the world", it's really difficult for people to know what you're talking about. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:53, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

I've returned your draft to your sandbox again. Please stop. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:40, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Hi, Lan.

I'm sorry, I did not understand completely how to build up Wikipedia page because of my lack of English skills. You mean do I need to write more detail about what is Clackamas Chinook story and Superior language skills?

Nana Tirotanpan (talk) 23:02, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

I really want to try again for improving this page, so could you give me a chance to create wikipedia page?

Nana Tirotanpan (talk) 23:03, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

@Tirotanpan You are free to continue working on your article in your sandbox. But please stop moving it to mainspace until it is ready. Thanks. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:08, 16 March 2022 (UTC)

Hi, Ian.

I rewrote the page again, so could you check it please? Tirotanpan (talk) 23:11, 16 March 2022 (UTC)