User talk:Thrice done french/state space sandbox
Review of State Space by Paul Langton (Thrice Done French) Quinton Hubbell ENGW 3302 11/18/19
Add the gameboard from Pacman if there aren't copyright issues, how does the presence of the ghosts and fruit alter the way the state space can be explored (I know these are inconsequential).
In the intro, push the queueing example so it doesn't rely on the examples to define. The definitions used are quite mathematical, and there are multiple non-graphical spaces that can be shown. Maybe show the monopoly gameboard or something so it doesn't strictly guide the reader into one train of thought. Consider using different phrasing instead of "for example", which is written three times in one paragraph.
Are there other problem-solving uses in physical space? When I think of modular interior design or floor planning, would that be considered a state space problem? I would love to see other conventional uses beyond programming and games.
Tone is consistent, neutral and explanatory. When diving into heady subjects, keep using links to other articles as it does make it fluid without adding excessive text. On that same subject, maybe use the gameboard from minesweeper or something so it isn't the exact same initial image as the Vacuum World game.
Add see also page with other wikipedia pages a reader might be interested in.
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