User talk:Thetrooper1981

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16:02, 23 March 2021 (UTC)

Welcome!

Hello, Thetrooper1981, and welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, one or more of the pages you created, such as Tinlicker, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's content policies and may not be retained. In short, the topic of an article must be notable and have already been the subject of publication by reliable and independent sources.

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In particular, my critique with your attempts is that:

You have references, but no inline citations, making it unclear which statements are for which source. Please see WP:REFB for a tutorial on how to do this.
A contents section is not necessary as Wikipedia software already has this Table of Contents built in to each article.
I fear this subject may not meet WP:MUSICBIO. See the welcome above this reply.

In case your attempts do get reverted again, a draft of this subject also exists at Draft:Tinlicker. You can use what you already have to improve that instead if advised to work in draftspace. Good luck! Jalen Folf (talk) 16:27, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tinlicker (April 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Praxidicae were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Tinlicker and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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TAXIDICAE💰 18:31, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]