User talk:Thedashmar
Thedashmar = Thomas Nolan, 2L @ Berkeley Law
Review for Getaped.com, Inc. v. Cangemi by Masamukai:
Second Review: Getaped.com, Inc. v. Cangemi. User: Thedashmar
Review: The article was very thorough and informative. The article begins with an introduction that includes a very important link to another wikipage, without which a crucial term and concept would not be defined. The article may have benefited from providing this later in the body as it is such an important and complicated concept.
The infobox is thorough and sufficient. The article is structured in a way that is very easy to read and given the depth of the subject matter, broken down into an appropriate number of subsections. There is also a helpful criticism section which provides a contrasting viewpoint, sufficiently cited.
The article is thoroughly referenced but maybe could have also benefited from a section linking related articles. The tone of the article was very neutral.
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