Good critique of the article. Obviously, this article is about fire fighting in a more urban setting and would not be a suitable article to work on for this class.
See how I added the wiki link to the article: two brackets around the title of the article.
Please choose an article and start a section in your sandbox where you begin editing it. I can't provide feedback without ideas from you. Come speak with me if you want ideas, or email me your general interest and I can see what I can do.
