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AfC notification: Draft:Joseph McCarthy has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Joseph McCarthy. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 06:14, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

Thanks for creating a draft!

Hello Testarossa4, welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Liance, and I've been editing here for a while. I wanted to thank you for submitting Draft:Joseph McCarthy to WikiProject Articles for Creation and helping to grow the encyclopedia! We appreciate your contributions and hope you stick around. I can see you've already started writing draft articles, so here are a few more resources that might be helpful:

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Joseph McCarthy (September 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by OlifanofmrTennant was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Needs alot of copy editing

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Joseph McCarthy and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:49, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Testarossa4! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:49, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Thank you. This is my first rodeo. How can I change the name? I realize it is confusing with the late senator but wasn't sure what the protocol is there. Joseph McCarthy | Urban Transportation Director? This Joe has a building named after him ... in Wisconsin where the senator was from, which adds to the confusion :) Testarossa4 (talk) 23:55, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Joseph McCarthy (September 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Joseph McCarthy and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 14:16, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]