User talk:Terriharris97/sandbox
Breanna's Peer Review
[edit]This is really good, Terri! I can see you're adding more information, which is good. What you have so far is informative and broad, and very easy to comprehend! I also liked how you linked to several different Wikipedia pages in your text, that's really helpful to providing more information. Great job! I do just have a couple suggestions for you:
-You need to cite where all of your information came from. If you got a sentence or a paragraph from a certain source, you need to put a citation at the end of the sentence or paragraph that contains the information from that source. Luckily, Dr. Harold put two videos in one of his recent emails explaining how to cite in Wikipedia, so definitely reference those for help!
-You can probably take out the first sentence where you say "This article is about Criminal Justice Reform in Pennsylvania." Whenever the article is published, the title will be there so people will already know what the article is about, but that's totally up to you.
That's really all that I saw, this is really good, and looking at where you're going with it, you're definitely on the right track. Great job, Terri!
Terri's Response
[edit]Hi Breanna! Thank you for this feedback this was very helpful, I will make these changes! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Terriharris97 (talk • contribs) 01:37, 8 April 2018 (UTC)