User talk:Tanmanjf/sandbox
Feedback on 2nd draft
[edit]- Remove internal link from Lifeboat Davit types heading. Since there are no other types listed, I suggest keeping heading as is, just Types.
- A few coding errors for inline references.
- One or more of the labeled photos could be embedded in the article near the text that refers to parts.
- Some of the technical terms further down in the article would benefit from an internal link.