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Hi. In your heading " RDF magazine" are you thinking of dividing the bio into different sections or putting into one heading? The original Wikipedia page has a heading on "Origins" which I would suggest rewording the heading and adding information from your sandbox to there. In the heading "Political Shift" I would suggest adding subheadings since you already have a structured bullet list and if you add these headings, it will make it clearer and coherent.
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