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to the top of the article) when you believe the concerns have been addressed. Thank you. Glacialfox (talk) 00:51, 7 November 2011 (UTC)Your submission at Articles for creation
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Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:07, 16 November 2011 (UTC)Stewart, I've done a quick copy-edit. Two other things: a) you might like to tweak the inline citations to make them a bit more descriptive (name of website/organization, title of book/article, author and date if appropriate, date retrieved if webpage). b) I wonder if there are any relevant diagrams or photographs (copyright-free, or licensed with a rationale justifying their use) that could help to explain the essence of the topic? Just a thought. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)