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https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Diversity_(politics)&veaction=edit&vesection=5 Ssledd1 (talk) 01:54, 23 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

1. http://web.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?vid=11&sid=770694ff-9b82-4d69-89f2-4c6e0ec67295%40sessionmgr112&hid=124&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=2942646&db=a9h 2. http://web.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?vid=18&sid=770694ff-9b82-4d69-89f2-4c6e0ec67295%40sessionmgr112&hid=124&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=102851795&db=a9h 3. http://web.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?vid=21&sid=770694ff-9b82-4d69-89f2-4c6e0ec67295%40sessionmgr112&hid=124&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=87392441&db=a9h 4. http://web.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?vid=23&sid=770694ff-9b82-4d69-89f2-4c6e0ec67295%40sessionmgr112&hid=124&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=8661689&db=a9h Ssledd1 (talk) 02:06, 23 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Sleep_surgery Ssledd1 (talk) 17:06, 23 October 2015 (UTC) 1. http://web.a.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?sid=1a8de337-0b93-44a3-b30c-745e15734ecf%40sessionmgr4004&vid=3&hid=4109&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=19663555&db=cmedm Botelho, Ricardo Vieira, et al. "The Effects Of Posterior Fossa Decompressive Surgery In Adult Patients With Chiari Malformation And Sleep Apnea." Journal Of Neurosurgery 112.4 (2010): 800-807. MEDLINE. Web. 26 Oct. 2015.[reply]

2. http://web.a.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?vid=6&sid=1a8de337-0b93-44a3-b30c-745e15734ecf%40sessionmgr4004&hid=4109&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=25820584&db=cmedm Senchak, Andrew J, et al. "The Effect Of Tonsillectomy Alone In Adult Obstructive Sleep Apnea." Otolaryngology--Head And Neck Surgery: Official Journal Of American Academy Of Otolaryngology-Head And Neck Surgery 152.5 (2015): 969-973. MEDLINE. Web. 26 Oct. 2015.

3. http://web.a.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?sid=1a8de337-0b93-44a3-b30c-745e15734ecf%40sessionmgr4004&vid=11&hid=4109&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=25895319&db=cmedm Wu, Yungang, et al. "[Uvulopalatopharyngoplasty And Hyoid Suspension For Obstructive Sleep Apnea Hyponea Syndrome]." Lin Chuang Er Bi Yan Hou Tou Jing Wai Ke Za Zhi = Journal Of Clinical Otorhinolaryngology, Head, And Neck Surgery 28.24 (2014): 1972-1974. MEDLINE. Web. 26 Oct. 2015.

4. http://web.a.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?vid=13&sid=1a8de337-0b93-44a3-b30c-745e15734ecf%40sessionmgr4004&hid=4109&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=25843814&db=cmedm Liu, Stanley Yung-Chuan, et al. "Lateral Pharyngeal Wall Tension After Maxillomandibular Advancement For Obstructive Sleep Apnea Is A Marker For Surgical Success: Observations From Drug-Induced Sleep Endoscopy." Journal Of Oral And Maxillofacial Surgery: Official Journal Of The American Association Of Oral And Maxillofacial Surgeons 73.8 (2015): 1575-1582. MEDLINE. Web. 26 Oct. 2015. Ssledd1 (talk) 05:02, 26 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

5. Giulio Gasparini, Claudio Vicini, Michele De Benedetto, et al., “Diagnostic Accuracy of Obstructive Airway Adult Test for Diagnosis of Obstructive Sleep Apnea,” BioMed Research International, vol. 2015, Article ID 915185, 8 pages, 2015. doi:10.1155/2015/915185

6. Aamir Yousuf, Zafarullah Beigh, Raja Salman Khursheed, Aleena Shafi Jallu, and Rafiq Ahmad Pampoori, “Clinical Predictors for Successful Uvulopalatopharyngoplasty in the Management of Obstructive Sleep Apnea,” International Journal of Otolaryngology, vol. 2013, Article ID 290265, 6 pages, 2013. doi:10.1155/2013/290265Ssledd1 (talk) 00:31, 28 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

A lot of good-looking sources, but they should be posted in the sandbox, not the talk page. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:19, 1 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

As far as I could tell, you only added two sources so far. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:30, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

I don't see your draft. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:26, 2 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The Philippines is a low HIV risk country, with less than 0.1 percent of the adult population estimated to be HIV-positive. Between 1984 and 2014 the greatest means of transmission was through sexual contact. Homosexual men are at the greatest risk of contracting HIV through sexual contact. The highest concentration of MSM (men who have sex with men) infected men is in Metro Manila. Several factors puts the Philippines at an increasing risk rate for HIV such as, a conservative culture, adverse to publicly discussing issues of a sexual nature; rising levels of sex work, casual sex, unsafe sex, and injecting drug use. In response to Thailand's growing HIV/AIDS epidemic, the Philippines created the Philippine National AIDS Council (PNAC). Ssledd1 (talk) 02:32, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This a good lead. There are only some punctuation problems: delete the commas before and after "a conservative culture" and convert all the semi-colons to commas. Then post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:07, 10 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]