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Peer Review (by Ben Harmon)

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I think your Wikipedia article is well written and organized. My only comments are minor ones.

Your article would benefit from a few more links to other Wikipedia pages, especially in the two sections after history. Words/phrases like "computer architecture", "algorithms", and "if-then logic" could use links to provide extra information to the reader if they need it.

The syntax is appropriate for the whole article except for the sentence "Specific applications in healthcare can be seen in the current and future applications section of the Watson article article". I feel like that sentence could be phrased more elegantly. Maybe you could simply say "There are many more specific applications for DeepQA in Healthcare". The phrase "specific applications" could be the link to the Watson article.

Also, is it possible to provide links to more of your sources? I don't believe Wikipedia requires it, but it would be helpful to anyone interested in reading them.