User talk:Sippy Grewal

Managing a conflict of interest

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Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicizing, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. JeffUK 14:55, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello JeffUK,

Thank you for your message and for ensuring the neutrality and quality of the article. I completely understand and respect Wikipedia’s guidelines. However, I believe there are some key areas of the article that still need clarification or additional information. Below are the specific updates I would like to propose:

=== 1. Correction of Sukha Singh’s Role ===

The article currently states that Sukha Singh was my business partner, which is inaccurate. Sukha Singh was a producer for a single film but was never a business partner. I would appreciate it if this detail could be corrected to accurately reflect his role.

=== 2. Impact on Punjabi Cinema ===

Since entering the industry, I have been deeply involved in not just producing but also distributing major Punjabi films. Under my leadership, the Punjabi film industry has experienced a remarkable change, including a 150% increase in box office revenue. I believe it is crucial to update the article to reflect this significant impact on the industry, which has been a major part of my career.

=== 3. More Detailed Information on My Filmography ===

I have added some updates regarding my film career, but I would like to ensure that the article fully reflects my work in the film industry. Specifically, I would like to highlight the following:

A more comprehensive list of films I have produced and distributed.
More detailed information on the role I played in each film, particularly my influence on the Punjabi film distribution market.
Achievements such as the increase in the box office revenue and successes of major releases under my production and distribution efforts.

=== 4. Additional Contributions to the Industry ===

Beyond my film work, I have been an active figure in shaping the future of Punjabi cinema. I believe this is a key part of my career that should be discussed in more detail, especially considering the scale of change in the industry since I began working in it.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could help update the article with this additional information. I am happy to provide further sources, references, or any other material needed to back up these changes.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to working together to improve this article and ensure it remains accurate and up-to-date.

Best regards,

Sippy Grewal Sippy Grewal (talk) 02:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

December 2024

Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia, as you did to Sippy Grewal. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. Helpful Raccoon (talk) 01:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]