User talk:Siebemat/sandbox

Review by Marciume (Attilio Rizzoli)

General remarks

-->Sometimes you use Typha, sometimes Typha (italic) -->You could add some more relevant inner-links to other wikipedia articles (see section by section)

Culinary uses

"When processed into flour it contains 266 kcal per 100 g."

-->what is exactly processed into flour? rhizomes?

"These are starchy, but also fibrous, so the starch must be scraped or sucked from the tough fibers. If the plants grow in polluted water the rhizomes can accumulate lead or residues of pesticides and should not be eaten.[11]"

-->space

-->add more inner-links to other wikipedia articles: pesticides, cossacks, asparagus, lineoleic acid, etc.

Uses

Building material

-->general remark: the three paragraphs may be more linked together by using connectors as "in addition", "in the past", "also", "even",…

"For the local tribes, Typha was one of the most important plants and every part of the plant had multiple uses."

-->no comma

Paper

-->add some inner-links

Fiber

-->add some inner-links

Images

Typha (蒲 gama?) with & without seeds. Seeds used for Futon (布団 or 蒲団 futon?) before cotton. -->punctuation marks: full stop