User talk:Shuelke/sandbox
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[edit]Group 1
[edit]While reading the background section i've noticed some grammatical errors. I would suggest prof reading this section so that the sentences flow.--Lwilliams3emu (talk) 16:54, 30 May 2019 (UTC) "which links crime crates in a neighborhood to neighborhood ecological characteristics," doesn't flow well, or I'm reading it wrong. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TaylorMarcusStudent (talk • contribs) 16:49, 30 May 2019 (UTC)
Group 2
[edit]You said you don't feel that "need" belongs in the heading - what do you plan on changing it to? Agree with getting rid of the "needs" part but not getting rid of the historical section. There also seems to be some grammatical errors that impact the flow and make sentences choppy. Lkovach5 (talk) 17:09, 30 May 2019 (UTC)