User talk:Schneids.10/sandbox
This article has a wealth of information and has a good flow of information. One suggestion is instead of using men and women you could use male and female. I did some minor changes with words but overall good article with a lot of good information. I hope they can publish or combine it with other articles. 20:04, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
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