User talk:Sbuch6/sandbox
This article and the changes you plan on making are all very well written and balanced relative to the importance they play in the topic. A few comments I have are that you should consider under the heading "medicines," going deeper into how ancient medicines were used in Rome and how whether they worked or did not work and what outcome they yielded. You talk a great deal about the Greek and Egyptian influence on the medical practice within Ancient Rome and should discuss the differences between medical procedures involving human revival or religious/sacrificial medical practices. Your "Dreams" section is a very good extension of your topic. This section demonstrates a very well balanced and informative perspective of different medical practices within Ancient Rome and how dreams were used to diagnose patients. Your structure was very clear filled with content that was neutral however if you can find any examples or instances that demonstrate other aspects of Ancient medicine i think that would help your page. Consider thinking about medical tools in the Ancient Roman world and how they were developed. You would be able to incorporate these aspects of the medical field into your writing or even create a new header for the existing article. Overall, your draft seems very concrete and well balanced written from a neutral perspective. Your research is thorough and your draft seems to be structured clearly with reliable sources.
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